AICE media studies

Part 1. After a lot of thought from my group mates and myself, we decided to do the same genre that we originally decided to do. We decided to do this because we had already created an idea for our music video. The genre that we had picked fit perfectly with this music video and our idea for the project going into it. Our music video ended up coinciding perfectly with our original idea. For our original idea planner, I have to thank Alex Nordyke for coming up with the greatest idea of our entire project, this of course was the choose not only for the genre of music we were going to use, but also the exact song that we would go on to listen to for our music video project. Part 2. Our group decided to copy to a representation group about Alex Dimartino’s idea about football, our character (which was played by Nathaniel Owen Greene) was the story about a young man who had an interest in playing a sport, this sport was called American Football. He had dreams of playing for Fort Lauderdale

here is my music video. Enjoy it!

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